Sweet linework! I love all the detail you were able to squeeze in, yet it doesn't feel uncomfortably busy. I really can't think of any improvements I would make. This would look really cool in color too!
I think this space is awesome, It feels like it would have really interesting lighting and color. The amount of detail in the drawing is also very impressive. I also like the consistent line quality it has a nice texture and "human handedness" to it. I think you made the dynamic shaped objects work well in the perspective. Looks great!
I' m really impressed with the details you put in. This drawing has a lot of potential. With the light coming in from the windows you can have interesting shadows. I hope I can see it in color.
Rebecca, I love the clean lines that all have so much character. Especially on some of the ellipses. I really like the contrast in curved lines vs the straight. My one suggestion would be that the desk looks a a bit crooked, maybe it isn't!