tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3539835269790748644.post6648750191700609299..comments2013-12-11T10:10:30.961-08:00Comments on BYU 2013 Fall: Illustration 4: Kendall Hale - Value PerspectiveJustinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14095292097119896225noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3539835269790748644.post-22261257406888406172013-11-26T08:14:34.724-08:002013-11-26T08:14:34.724-08:00This is really quite beautiful. Structurally, I...This is really quite beautiful. Structurally, I'm not sure that far wall could stand with all that stained glass in it; the weight of the roof might make it come crashing down. But I suppose that's not the point of the piece, so I'll give you a break. I love the people in it because it heightens the sense of scale. I would be careful that the floor tiling does not continue through their bodies. Another thought, I would love to see some more texture. Having a sense of stone on the walls would really put the icing on the cake.Samanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257729312107137064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3539835269790748644.post-45797888803376632292013-11-25T16:57:05.024-08:002013-11-25T16:57:05.024-08:00Play up the depth and the intensity of the lightin...Play up the depth and the intensity of the lighting to get a more potent or ethereal feeling to it. Great shape for sure.Nathan C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04542395161891912563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3539835269790748644.post-31742272692562055822013-11-25T12:48:31.835-08:002013-11-25T12:48:31.835-08:00This is awesome Kendall! I would second with Renee...This is awesome Kendall! I would second with Renee on having more contrast in the grey areas of the piece by pushing some of those lighter areas. Great Job though! Chelsea Daltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12987250919926682077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3539835269790748644.post-68589270670307302952013-11-25T09:06:35.151-08:002013-11-25T09:06:35.151-08:00Hey nice job, this is a pretty epic piece you'...Hey nice job, this is a pretty epic piece you've got here. Nice flow to your shapes in the stained glass and the details of the figures are wonderful. I like the scale you've established too, it definitely adds to the epicness. One suggestion, you've got such a bright light source coming through your stained glass but your ground plane hints at a very subtle light source, I'd really up the contrast there to maintain the lighting set up you've started. <br />Renee Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090158876785182063noreply@blogger.com